Tweet analysis: Kanye West

I was all ready to make my big pitch about how every public figure and business needs an editor to check their social-media posts before they go out, but then I saw this and realized the world would be a less wonderful place without tweets like that from Kanye West.

Sloppy or brilliant, I’m glad it’s there.

Moving on, I’m pretty sure his favourite form of punctuation is an ellipsis. I’d advise him to cut down on that a little.

Please, think of the reader and relatability before you tweet!

Ouch, too much all-caps.

Verdict: Writer’s voice comes through clearly. Could use a little tidying, but not too much.

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